Friday, April 10, 2009

"LIGHT OF TEARS"


"LIGHT OF TEARS"


The night was sad,
heart was lonely
with deep silent sky
each of my pain
was alone crying
and "light of tears"
was only mine
whole night
with silver shine

10 comments:

Birds Watching Group Ratlam (M.P.) said...

feeling was yours
no more people with tears
happy were many
no one found lonely
it was pain still
big was party's bill

G M Rajesh said...

tears lighten up
the meaning of sorrow
it cant found back
every tomorrow

last day it was hanumaanji's birthday
lonelyness is not the matter everyday

there are many things to kill
why pain in every times feel

generate confidance benieth
and found many bloggers with

Dev said...

Seema ji,
Love comes with pain, love comes with tears, but this tears of love is loveable, the pain of love is loveable..once angain lovely and deep poem...

Each of my pain
was alone crying...

Regards

दिलीप कवठेकर said...

Now , the LIGHT OF TEARS is seen by all of us, and the silver shine is changed to GODEN SHINE!

Tears not only relieves you of your pain but also RELIVES the pain, sometimes multiplying the pain.However, in both cases, you are not alone, but your pain is your companian.

RAJ SINH said...

I DON'T KNOW SAID WHO .

BUT , THE POEM .........

DEAREST , THE PAIN OF LOVING YOU .
IS MORE............THAN I CAN BEAR !

REFLECTS YOU .

BEAUTIFULLY CONCEPTED !

Dev said...

आपको और आपके पुरे परिवार को वैशाखी की हार्दिक शुभ कामना !

jamos jhalla said...

MAY GOD BLESS THEE BAISAAKEE KI KHUSHIYAAN TROUGHOUT THE YEAR AND REMOVE PAIN,SORROW OF LOVEBLE LOVE.
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pankaj said...

seema ji your poems are very painful but ur choice of colour and things so beautiful. i think u have pain in heart but u did not want to show this to world and always look cheer ful

pankaj said...

seema ji your poems are very painful but ur choice of colour and things so beautiful. i think u have pain in heart but u did not want to show this to world and always look cheer ful

अभिन्न said...

its full of sadness,tears,and pains but the bright side of the poem is thought of a support from all these lights of tears.....
its a beautiful collection.
regards