Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Writing passion


Writing passion

On the bright tail of the lake
Contribution from the bright rays
I put part of the writing passion
holding my loves finger
Hiding from the world's eyes
I hav to go flying across the sky
with stars filled in my hands
flowing in your love ocean
wanna go deep down high
When you step down gently
in deep water of the lake
go quietly tocuhing your lips
These spry waves falling shy

16 comments:

G M Rajesh said...

seems within love stream
ray of hope some where
water like the peace
you have wrote a dream

शरद कोकास said...

flowing in your love .. this imagery is beautiful ..

अमिताभ श्रीवास्तव said...

"I put part of the writing passion
holding my loves finger
Hiding from the world's eyes
I hav to go flying across the sky... "
beautiful ..tuch

Sambhav said...

beautiful.

Devendra said...

...nice.

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MUFLIS said...

nice write !
captivating...!!

Nezzy said...

Simply beautiful! I just wanted to pop over and thank you for your visit and sweet comment. Please come by often, the door of the Ponderosa is always open.

May you have a beautifully blessed day!!!

जयकृष्ण राय तुषार said...

very nice blog and view

Suman said...

nice

आशीष/ ASHISH said...

I kinda find it strange....
While you create beautiful imagery of love by your poetry; the title of your blog shouts LOVE NEVER LOVES!
Contradictory, but still I loved it!

अरुणेश मिश्र said...

nice .

Hari Shanker Rarhi said...

makes one feel nice.

Dawn said...

Stunning visual photos along with moving words

Love Dawn xx

Tammie said...

lovely to meet you through your poetry. Thank you for your kind comment on my art blog.

NatureFootstep said...

thanks for visiting my butterfly blog. I find a lot of great work of arts in your blogs. ;)