Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Reality of ground truth

Reality of ground truth

At the door of eye wink
sob Used to knock
Trembling lip could not speak
Hiccups are flaming embers into
Cloud of your vision
did not appear
to shower in direct
Isolated from the sharp blow
Expectations have been blown out of
Reality of ground truth
alerted making noise
and we could not meet
as bridge of destiny remain unbuilt


Rakesh Kaushik said...

owesome, deep truth, n fasiniting lines

tht's faburlous thought.

अभिन्न said...

and we could not meet
as bridge of destiny remain unbuilt
........what a poetic shower of words on ground of truth.destiny.......????????????????????????its a big and unanswred question since centuries.
congratulations for a classic touch in ur poetry with a uniqueness

Devendra said...

अंग्रेजी कविता से मैं सदैव दूर भागता रहा हूँ इसका कारण मेरा इस भाषा में अल्पग्यान ही है
इस कविता का भाव समझ गया--
..भाग्य का पुल अभी बना नहीं ....
बहुत सुंदर कविता है आपकी ह्रदयस्पर्शी।

सुलभ सतरंगी said...

nice one!

Belisa said...

Thanks for your visit and also for your words. I like to see your "blog" but I don't understand very well what you said, only some things...


राजू मिश्र said...

good seema ji.good.

पंकज said...

beautiful & thoughtprovoking