Saturday, January 2, 2010

'Come quietly'



'Come quietly'

When the sun might be diffused
Be seized and red in the sky
A soft wind gust
Scattered to touch your hairs
Edge of the moon is shining
Even the stars to wake sleeping
doors chain quitely
Be hiding in the arms of sleep
Roaming stray pieces of cloud
Become gatekeepers turns cautious
Hiding in solitude
I will opened the door of heart
You come quietly
peeping in my eyes
to live Ages in a singal moment

12 comments:

RAJ SINH said...

VERY VERY TOUCHING !
.......WILL LIVE AGES AND FOREVER ,THOUGH FELT IN A SINGLE MOMENT .

TRUE LOVE IS BOUND WITHIN NO BOUNDS !

COMES WHEN WANTS ......
AND GOES NEVER .....
EVEN IF ONE WANTS .

YOU DON'T CHOOSE LOVE ....
LOVE CHOOSES YOU....
FOREVER !

MUHABBAT KE LIYE KUCHH KHAS DIL MAKOOL HOTE HAIN .....
HAI VO NAGMA KI JO HAR SAAZ PAR GAYA NAHEEN JATA .

THANKS....
FOR FEELINGS , A TOUCH OF SOUL IN YOUR POETRY .

ACCEPT MY GREETINGS ,THOUGH BELATED .

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY 2010 .....AND BEYOND !

राकेश कुमार said...

I will opened the door of heart
You come quietlypeeping in my eyes
to live Ages in a singal moment

really speechless.

अद्भुत कविता, हर शब्द मे वही मार्मिकता, वही कोमल स्पर्श जिसके लिये सीमा जी को मै जानता हू, जितनी बार आपकी अन्ग्रेजी और हिन्दी की कविताओ को पढा करता हू बस अनायास मुख से मा सरस्वती से प्रार्थना के ये शब्द निकल पडते है कि सीमा जी की कल्पना शक्ति और लेखनी को वह जगत रचियता हर क्षण नये आयाम दे.

G M Rajesh said...

chand chhup jaaye
tum haule se aana
mere dil ke darwaaje
khule hai chupke se aanaa

wah jajbaaton ki aandhiyon se mai to hil gayaa.
maaf karna traslation likh diya
aisa lagaa apni hi panktiyaan gungunaai ho goya.

Rakesh Kaushik said...

It's really a fantastic poem. i think this is the New Year Gift For me. I hope She will Continue this work forever with perfection.

Happy New Year 2010. I hope This New Year Brings u lots of happiness n prospaeity in ur life.



Rakesh Kaushik

alka sarwat said...

fantastik

नए साल में हिन्दी ब्लागिंग का परचम बुलंद हो
स्वस्थ २०१० हो
मंगलमय २०१० हो

पर मैं अपना एक एतराज दर्ज कराना चाहती हूँ
सर्वश्रेष्ठ ब्लॉगर के लिए जो वोटिंग हो रही है ,मैं आपसे पूछना चाहती हूँ की भारतीय लोकतंत्र की तरह ब्लाग्तंत्र की यह पहली प्रक्रिया ही इतनी भ्रष्ट क्यों है ,महिलाओं को ५०%तो छोडिये १०%भी आरक्षण नहीं

AMIT VERMA said...

This is a super emotional poem. I simply loved it and going to forward to all of my friends..
Thanks for sharing..

amit verma

Valerie said...

You write stunningly beautiful poetry. I wanted to thank you for stopping by Joy in the Rain. You are very talented! Nice to meet you! Val =)
http://joyintherain-val.blogspot.com

MUFLIS said...

you come quietly peeping in my eyes
to live ages in a single moment...

very nice....
just captivating

c o n g r a t s .

पंकज said...

एक और अद्भुत कविता

अमृत कुमार तिवारी said...

very touching....still i am feeling suppose to be cold and freez...but each n every line stroked my heart with warm feeling..
very loving poem.

Satyendra Kumar said...

Soft and nice poem
lacking a little bit .....(in the middle stanza.......something)
but don't know what ? I'm not a poet ,but it is touching like that .

psingh said...

इस बेहतरीन रचना के लिए
बहुत बहुत बधाई ......................