Saturday, June 5, 2010

'Valley of words '

In the Valley of words
These swirling mind,
Looking for some particles
which can express with dignity
beautiful anthem of love,
Hidden ambition of life
Suppressed curiosity in the eyes
Static language of silence,
In terms of the litigants
These swirling mind,
Looking for ......

18 comments:

अभिन्न said...

valley of words seems like valley of flowers.
perfection with aesthetisism.
like;
beautiful anthem of love...
static language of silence

अभिन्न said...

शब्दों की वादियों मे

विचरता ये मन ,

खोज रहा कुछ ऐसे कण ,
जो सजा सके मनोभावों को,
चाहत के सुंदर साजों को,
लुकती छुपती अभिलाषा को,
नैनो मे दुबकी जिज्ञासा को,
सिमटी सकुचाई आशा को,
निश्चल प्रेम की भाषा को,
शब्दों की वादियों मे
विचरता ये मन ,
खोज रहा कुछ ऐसे कण....(courtsy: Seema Gupta)

आशीष/ ASHISH said...

Beautiful phrases....
Anthem of love, Language of Silence...
Yet I could not make a ,eaning out of it!
I am clicking the tab for follow-up comments.....
Expect that you will explain!
At my blog:
Why are Clouds Vagarant...?

माधव said...

REALLY NICE

अनामिका की सदाये...... said...

beautiful lines. every word is expressings its own story. nice poem.

निशांत मिश्र - Nishant Mishra said...

Well set emotions:)

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अरुणेश मिश्र said...

nice .

Valerie said...

Hi Seema, just popped in to thank you for visiting one of my blogs and leaving such nice comments. Yo have an interesting blog here.

zeashan zaidi said...

beautiful!

Vicki Lane said...

Very evocative.

Victoria said...

Hello Seema, I wanted to visit your blog and thank you for your comments.

Your poem is beautifully eloquent.

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hello Seema:)

Lovely poem skillfully crafted with amazing selection of words to portray thought provoking portraits.

Best wishes:)
Joseph

छत्तीसगढ़ पोस्ट said...

very nice...

Latha Nair said...

'Valley of words'
turns out to be a
rhythmic melody!
Good one!

KParthasarathi said...

lovely lines with choice words.
Thanks for visiting my blog reflections.This is dormant.Pl see the other blog- random thoughts

Amrita said...

Awesome poetry Seema.

Kiki said...

Beautiful poetry..super lovely! Wonderful site..thanks for leaving such kind sweet words on mine!
Kiki~

G M Rajesh said...

i feel