"Just Go Away"
My perplexity to know
How much away?
from............
profundity of vision ?
stratum of Heart?
Jitters of Mind?
staple of soul?
mightiness of Self?
or
petulance of imagination?
..away
How much away???
13 comments:
if your close to someone Seema a sentence like 'just go away' can have many facets and you portray this very well with this poem, good piece.
by Penfold Dax
very nice.thought provoking ink.liked it.
(Tiku)
away away who have no eyes for beauty
by kaviyogidrpandianIAS
An awesome read, short but with powerful vocab to augment its meaning, even gave me a couple new words, anyways, glad i stumbled upon it, best wishes.
(Joe Savarese Jr. USA)
Nope. Don't go away, just strutt your stuff up and down his pathway till he takes a hike.
(pauline miller UK)
I especially liked,'petulance of imagination'. A wonderful phrase.
(by Schrödinger's Cat)
Hello Seema, the best way is to get him right out of your system and cut him right out of your life. Best of luck in doing that, though. Only time will tell if it's far enough.
Short with just the right words!
Very deep and cleverly thought out. Well done!
I especially liked,'petulance of imagination'. A wonderful phrase.
Nicely done Seema. When someone says "just go away" it realy can be perplexing. How far away must we go? Great poem!
nice feeling within lines
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